Literary feedback wanted: The Soul Sea

The Soul Sea is the name of the fantasy novel I’m currently writing. If you go here you can read the first four chapters. Ignoring spelling/grammer mistakes (because I can grab them later), I’d love any and all feedback you’d care to give, whether it be good or bad. I’m basically wanting to know if this beginning is interesting, and does it make you want to know more, but anything else you’d care to add would be greatly appreciated.